Treatment for my horror movie

Act 1:

It is on a cloudy, windy and greyish day. Winter starts soon. The wind blows up the leaves from trees, creating a thick layer of leaves along the old, narrow road to a wooden, classic but elegant villa. There are several cars parking in front of the gate.

The clock slowly turns its pointer to number 12. In a dark room, a young mother, wearing a white sleeping cloth, her hair is extremely long which covers most of her face, is sitting on a bed with her daughter, and is lying. “Mom, you hair is so nice and long. When can my hair be as long as yours?” asks the daughter innocently. “Just in a few years, not very long, my darling”, replies the mother. “Honey….” Says the mother. “Yeah...” “Do you love me?” asks the mother as she holds her child’s hands. “Of course I do, mom. I love you forever.” A silence breaks out. “Mom, I can’t get a sleep right now. Can you sing for me?” says the daughter as she turns her face into her mother’s arms. The mother smiles. “Which one you like?” asks the mother as she rubs on her daughter’s hair. “The usual one” replies the daughter and she starts to close her eyes. The mother starts lulling her child to sleep.

“I’m so disappointed at you! Get out of my life now. You don’t deserve to be in this family. You make me sick. I disgust you. I loved you by all my heart. I loved you as much as I could. What are the results I got? Just a lie. Your love is a lie. I gave you everything and you gave me the lie. The lie is like a knife blade strikes straight to my heart. How can I forgive you? No… It’s impossible. I don’t want to see your face! I-NEVER-WANT-TO-SEE-YOUR-FACE-AGAIN!” shout out loudly from a man’s voice as the mother walks back to her room, slowly.
She opens here eyes. The open of the windows from her room causes a freezing sense surround, running accord her spinal cord. The white and thin curtain is blown up by the wind from the windows. She feels lonely. “Mom… Where are you?” asks the daughter. She holds tight her doll, gets off her bad, wearing her slipper and starts walking down to her mother’s room. She gradually opens the door. The dizzy sound created by the old door makes she feel unsafe. The door was stuck. She uses all of her power to push it. The door suddenly opens, nothing is there. She turns her body around. The doll is dropped down. The little girl screams and falls down on her knee.

Act 2:

“Honey, you’re back! How’s your day?” asked by the wife, solicitously. “Well, just like the others. Tiring and boring”, replied by the husband. The wife is a beautiful woman whose hair is very long and soft. Yet it seems like she hate people knowing that so she tights it up. The husband carrying a black bad. He just came home from his office. He is in a messy form. The bear makes him appear to be way older than his real age. “I’m kinda hungry, have you got anything for me to eat?” asks the husband in a tiring voice. “Yeah, wait a minute…” She turns her back and heads to the kitchen. He closes his eyes.

He opens his eyes. He rolls his eyes around to see where he is and recognises that he’s in his room. He is tightened on his bed. His mouth is covered by a black tape and his top is removed. He tries to escape but obviously, he can’t. He tries to close his eyes again as he thinks it is just a dream. It’s impossible. Suddenly, a young lady whose face covered by the long hair pops in, sitting next to him. He feels a cold wind running through his body. He knows this breath, this smell, but he can’t remember what they’re from. He screams loud!

“Tim, Tim, wake up! What’s wrong with you? You’re so wet...” says Lily, who has just brought up some of breads and placed them on the table. “Ah, no, no.. Nothing, just a bad dream...” he breaths heavily and answers her in an unconvincing way. “Haiz, you just dreamt about her again, didn’t you? Look, she’s gone. You need to accept the truth. After what she’s done to you, you can still remember her? Oh my... Tim, you need to be strong” advices Lily. He ignores her and starts to eat his breads. “Where’s Kim? How has she been? I haven’t seen her for ages. I hope she’s fine” says Tim. “Well, you do not have to worry about her. She’s fine. However, she’s a bit weird these days. She cut her hair and keeps talking about the doll. I think she is still upset about her death, especially to see her body on that day is over to an 11-years-old girl” says Lily in a normal voice, a little bit careless. “Hum, give her some more time and she will get over from it, I hope” says the man while he finishes the last piece of his toast.

“Kim... Kim... Kim... Are you there?” yells Lily as she is knocking the door from Lily’s room. After a while with no response, she decides to get in the room. It is a dark room. A small bed is place right beside a window looking through an old and left playground. On the wall, there are some drawings from the girl. Most of them are brief drawings of a happy family: a dad, a mom and a young girl. However, there are some pictures about a young lady wearing a white sleeping cloth, her hair is long and covers most of her face. There is no sign of life in the room. Lily rolls her eyes around the room. Suddenly, a young girl sitting on a chair, holding her doll and facing down the ground. She does nothing. Her hair is short and messy. After a minute of shocking, Lily takes her calm back and starts to raise her voice: “Why didn’t you answer me? Are you deaf?” as she slaps on the young girl’s face. “She will return for her own revenge” says the child. “AND YOU WILL PAY FOR WHAT YOU’VE DONE” shout from the child. “Shut your mouth up and go down for dinner! NOW!” says Lily in an angry voice and she turns her back.

Act 3:

In the dining room, 3 people are eating silently. Everyone is like a machine, doing what they are supposed to do, soulless. The food is cooked briefly and simply. Suddenly, Kim says: “Ah, mom’s home, mom’s home”. Both Tim and Lily are surprised. “What did you say?” asks Tim, very worry and shows his scariness in his voice. “Mom’s home!” answers Kim. She lowers her face, her hair drops down, cover half of her face. Her eyes are reflected from the light, making a bright light appear and disappear alternately. Suddenly, the house’s power is cut. Everything sinks into darkness. Kim roars. Lily drops her plate, broken. Tim is about to get a torch. However, the light is back on. Kim starts to scream again. Most of the things in the kitchen have now removed to a different place. As soon as the electricity is back on, Tim realises that everything has been changed in which “she” prefers them to be as she was alive. He falls down on the chair, holding his head, showing his disbelief about what has happened.

“Please, I’m begging you! Please go! Please get out of this family. You annoy us so much! And I’m sorry for doing those things. I really do not want to do so but I have to. He never forgets you. The reason why he married me is just because I look like you. This hair and this face are similar to you. Don’t you see that? I just want him to forget you... I did those things, just to make him scare of you. But it seems like the more I do those, the more he remembers about you. Please, get out...” Lily monologues, in her room, as she is looking into the photo of “she”. Outside the door, Tim stands straight. He can’t believe what he’s heard. He closes his eyes, shaking his head!!! He takes the key, going to a pub...

Lily is sleeping. It is now around midnight. Suddenly, she can hardly breathe. She feels like someone is sitting on her. She tries to turn her body but she cannot. Even to open her eyes, she cannot. Her clothes are so wet. Then the feeling fades away. Suddenly, her door is opened! A white shadow slowly gets in, nearer and nearer to her bed. She starts to scream. Her body is frozen. She starts to cry and confess “Please, please, please forgive me! I know my sin! I know it’s not human. But I love him so much. I don’t want him to think about you all the time. Yeah, I admit that I did those things because of jealousy! Just leave me alone! I won’t do that...” “I know it! You’re such a bitch!” the mask is thrown away. Tim appears under the ghost’s clothes. “I trust you! I married you because I loved you. It’s nothing to do with her! I just felt that I had the responsibility of her death that I’m kinda obsessed about it. How could you be such jealous? Now, go! Get out of this family! Now! I do not want to see your face anymore!!!” A cold wind blows up the room; make the bunch of light falls down on Tim. He dies immediately. He has to pay for his betrayal.