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Title: Working title
By: Jamie

Good point: Very effective opening sequence. It gets the attention of the audiences at the very first beginning.
Problems: Possibly hard to shoot in a hospital and the head on the steak.

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Title: Working title
By: Alex Newton

Goodpoint: An interesting idea of using the black book, it's quite effective. It is very realistic, helps to increase the creepy tension as a happy family moves to a new house and gets problems.
Problems: Need more development for the end.

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My presentation went quite well, I think. Sound effect, the sound track that me and my friend have composed, worked perfectly which made the idea more real and effective to the class. However, I think that I need to develope more about the end as I was quite concentrated on the opening sequence.